Dialogue Offer and Suggestions

SCHOOL IMMERSION

Here's my short dialogue about offer and suggestions with my friend,Violet 

Zahra : Hi,Violet!
Violet : Hello, Zahra
Zahra : Have you heard about the school immersion?
Violet : Yes of course, where would you like to go?
Zahra : I'm thinking of Sumba
Violet : But I think its too far, maybe Bali would be niceZahra : Yes it is a good idea!lets fill in the form at school
Violet : But I can't go to school today
Zahra : I'll fill in the form, if you wantViolet : Yes please, I would really appreciate it
Zahra : Okay, I'll call you later
Violet : Thank you, you are an angel